Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
[x]

deviantART

 
©2003-2010 *duris
:iconduris:

Artist's Comments

Terragen - Mystery valley

Critiques


Thank you for your Critique

You are not logged in.

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:iconx-horizon:
ow very nice shot!!
perfect reflection on the water and also the brightness and Contrast is set perfectly.
The background rocks look a bit "plastic" though.. the light is looking strange somehow... :) (Smile)

but nice job

--
~*Eternal Endless Indefinite*~

My bands Homepage:

=> [link] => [link] ,also check => ~silverstar71
:iconmoonlady:
Wow, you're getting good at this. Aww
The water is spot on and the textures look awesome. Nice work on the lines. Aww

--
:batty:But how come I want you, like the soil yearns for the rain?:batty:
:iconfusionx:
nice work here lovely colors water land,, only hing that seems a bit strange is the banding on the wrocks, i think it needs to have alot more to give a real feel of erosion, otherwise very nice work :) (Smile)

--
Visit [link]
:iconwolfcat:
Very nice - love the lighting and cloud shadows ... very moody.

The rock strata looks a little like someone has stuck tape around the rocks, t hough. Perhaps more lines of slightly differing colours blended together in the texture?

All in all, an excellent piece. :-) (Smile)

--
WolfCat
Co Durham
:iconstotty:
Wow, this is strangely surreal, the calmness looks odd here, but its not easy to put my finger on it - I think it could be the waves being so tiny - maybe either no ripples, or bigger, gentle waves. The layout is wonderful and the rock texture has the right level of bumpyness.

The only other thing apart from the water I could offer as advice would be the strata on the rock and texturing, did you use a noise pic to roughen it up any first, if not that may help the rigid lines and stop the need for blurring. Also, you could try blurring the strata bmp too. In addition, it would help if you added a child texture from this of the same rock colour with medium-low coverage to break up the lines too. The area below the verticals, that seems to be lacking some other textures, maybe slightly darker and don't forget the wet area at the base too.

All round mighty fine image though - stotty applauds loudly. Good work.

--
Stottys Landscapes - [link]
:iconbillybollocks:
Its all been said so I will just say Great Work:D (Big Grin)

--
Rimmer : Step up to Red Alert!
Kryten : Sir, are you absolutely sure? It does mean changing the bulb.
:iconpussypatrol:
:iconsanosoke:
looks good for the whole, there are a few things I take issue with.
First is this strata texture you've got, but everyone else has said something, so I'll just suggest putting in a whole lot more lines and colors, usually they are packed pretty tightly. . .and then follow everyone else's advice.
The water looks weird (refer to Stotty's comment)
There needs a very small, darker shoreline right at the bottom for the most recent tide shift that wouldn't have dried off at all yet.
Lastly, the color of the rock implies a soft rock, clay thing, like sandstone or something. As is, I can't imagine that it would be as solid as your terrain suggests. I would eiither change the color of the rock to show that it can stand with that water around, or change the terrain to be more realistic with this unstable rock
Ok, that's all, nice piece, maybe a little more depth to it could help too
:iconvelociraptor:
The water and land contrast nicely. The mirror like water helps also. The light rays coming down look odd as they seem cut off. Still that is a nice render.

--
Reality Is What You Believe it To Be

Furry Photos Pet Photography

Check out *Thumbshare

Stock Photos
:iconladonia:
very nice =) (Smile) cant really add anything that isnt said thou

--
locomokipkachelkanariefantje!

Details

January 24, 2003
606 KB
1280×960

Statistics

26
23 [who?]
2,363 (0 today)

Share

Link
Embed
Thumb

Site Map